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22 October, 2010 at 4:10 pm
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Participant
I belive the cutting word traditionally comes at the end of one of the lines… /pedant
Summer
Gives reason to eat ice cream
Or maybe sweeties
[where I have utilised the western version of the cutting word, and inserted an ellipsis as a break, as the original japanese verse writers intended the kireji to be. Not that I’m not busy or anything atm…]