Very impressive. Made me laugh. Liked the books. I want the meter. Does it really plug in and work on a mac? Nothing else seems to.
Think it should be shorter. You may have killed your glamorous assistant throwing prickers at her like that. Was your cameraman a man? Or a woman? If you refer to readers I expect subtitles. And I also wanted to be able to read the titles of your books. I’m nosy like that. The only one I could be sure of was Thomas the Tank. I’m not interested in Thomas the tank Engine.