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Anonymous

Well, I stand corrected. But your last haiku has 18 morae. And apparently it should address the natural world, contain a seasonal word, and a “cutting word”. So:

Winter comes again;
Amputated toes can’t freeze.
My silver-lined cloud.

I’ve been very literal with my definition of cutting word there…

Thank you for the creative credit as well. (I also came up with the tagline) I should confess to not actually being a diabetic… I do get my blood tested regularly though – almost every time I visit Tim!